War-rhyme
drumlins rollacross stealing sandempty vessels beyond commandsalty rainin reddened eyesclouds reason withdarkened skies
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This gave me a sense of defeat. I have always believed that there can be no win in any war, and this string of words demonstrates it beautifully. Very well said ~
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A sense of futility...the other side of the coin from the words of victory...Every new beginning comes fromsome other beginnings end...Why not try a new beginning...at The Maelstrom...
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Reminds me of stories I heard from "the Battle of the Bulge"in WWII. Stark and riveting, I think you captured the hopelessness of war amazingly."clouds reason withdarkened skies"
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